Take a Thug Take

"Takes" are a staple of cartoon humor, and I've put together a scene with seven in a row! Should be seven times funnier than any other cartoon!

I'm inclined to be selfish and do this scene myself, really get an opportunity to stretch some useful animation muscles. But I think instead, for the good of the project, I'll spread this one around. I'd like everyone involved (who's interested) to pick a number and do a thug take.

You'll need to design the thug first, and then stay a little within certain parameters.

• You don't have to use the exact same number of frames that I did in my place-holder animation. Do what you need to do for your special take.
  
• I'd like to say you can "go crazy", but not TOO crazy. It's a cartoony cartoon, but not the cartooniest cartoon. Something like this won't work in our context:

• Every thug wears the same outfit of black body suit and ski cap.

Sign up today!

For your edification:
I've knocked out my thug take. Here it is moving...

And stills...

Build 18

There's been some progress.

I've been working on a "dead spot" in the animatic where UF was standing waving to the crowd for too long. I decided to have him vamp for his adoring fans with some karate moves. The scene is a lot of fun, and full of things animators hate! Crowd scenes, animated camera moves, and weird camera angles. I think I got this idea because I've just seen Kung Fu Panda. Loved it!

This version also features a new music edit. I wanted to build up the phoney super hero getting suited up, so they've added a little to the front of the song for me.

There are also several other updates throughout. Enjoy!

What's Expected of Animators?

This is an unusual project in that there's no budget, no schedule, and no real client. (Of course I'm hoping to please the band, but probably for the most part they might prefer I put less into it and be finished already) I want the finished product to be an animation showcase for the studio, as well as for everyone working on it!, and yet I too am anxious to finish.

With that competing criteria, it could be confusing to know how to handle your animation assignments. Well I'm the DIRECTOR, and I'm here to make it more confusing! The answer is, do what you'd like and we'll work from there. To suggest what that means, here's some examples.

Nobody took scene 10, so I assigned it to myself. Here's the animatic/storyboard:

The simplest thing would be to make a graphic with the thug's arms and legs flailing and just scale it up and off screen, much like the place-holder art. That might have served, but there was a lot more opportunity for fun animation. Here's what I did instead:

It's hard to see, but I really enjoyed doing some full animation (on 2s) of the thug flying through space, obviously not following the storyboards very closely, but having fun with the set up.

Here's another scene that I handled very differently:

Maybe you can tell there are no inbetweens between these poses...

Only some squash on the foot and some secondary on his cape and clothes. It's a very economical scene and I think it looks great that way!

So do what feels right for you and the scene! Send me roughs and check in if you have questions.

Thug Designs

Anybody want to help with designing a half dozen (or so) thugs for Ultrafoot to send running scared?

Assignments

Since we're all doing this for free and I want it to be as fun and rewarding as it can be, whenever possible I'd like people to be able to pick their own assignments.

Here's what needs doing:

Scene 2

• Clean up (Clean up on scenes 2 and 3 was done, but I think it could look a lot better)
  

Scene 3

• Clean up
• Background layout - interior of the costume shop
  

Scene 4

• Clean up - My animation is rough, I know I'm asking a lot from clean up!
• Background layout
  

Scene 5

• Effects animation - the clean up artist put in an indication of leaves blowing around, I like the idea, but I'd like to work on something more dynamic, a bigger pile of leaves and some dust maybe.
• Background painting
  

Scene 6

• Add some bounce to the van
• Flash adjustments to Ultrafoot's animation. The clean up artist got the right idea, but this needs a little finess. For example, you can see he floats up off the ground for a moment.
• Effects animation - There's a puff of smoke when Ultrafoot takes off but I'd like to see it bigger, more animated and dynamic.
• Background - we need a scrolling city street scene, nothing too fancy.
  

Scene 7

• Slight repair to the run cycle animation

Scene 8

• Combination of animation and clean up. Ultrafoot's zip in needs to be animated (this might be considered effects animation) His stamp and jump need assisting and cleaning.
• The van's bounce into the air looks good, but it needs to land on it's side.
  
• Background layout and even some background animation because I want to see the buildings jump a little when UF brings his foot down.
  

Scene 9

• Animation

Scene 10

• Animation of flayling thug
• Background

Scene 15

• Animation

Scene 16

• Animation - Ultrafoot bolts awake and lifts his newly ultrafied foot.

Scene 18

• Animation
• Background/Effects animation - I want to see Ultrafoot knock a hole in the clouds

Scene 19

• Animation - Ultrafoot's foot serves as a scene transition wipe.

Pick your favorite and let me know what you want to do!

Backgrounds and Layouts

One of the things that drove me bonkers on Ruby Rocket was that there was almost no opportunity to properly compose the screen. I did the storyboards absolutely as fast as I could, often reducing the background to just a couple of slashes to perhaps indicate that something was back there. There was supposed to be a "layout" stage where the backgrounds and character poses would be tightened up before finished animation and backgrounds would be done. Didn't happen, and I was left trying to figure out how to squeeze the animation into cluttered and ill-conceived backdrops so that it could be seen. (This is all on me, and not a reflection of the terrific background work I got!)

We have an opportunity now to correct that mistake (and others). For many scenes, I'll ask for a background layout sketch, something simple and complimentary to the character animation. I'll drop those sketches into the animatic to make sure it's all working before doing a finished painting.

I'm looking for a fairly simple and cartoony style for the backgrounds, but also painterly, not flat shapes filled with ugly flat colors like you'd see on Family Guy or The Simpsons. (Funny shows, but hideously ugly!) Here's some inspirational examples:





Ruby Rocket backgrounds were very detailed and elaborate and I want to get away from that with Ultrafoot. I'd rather see attention paid to design and color, not a lot of detail. If you're working on backgrounds, imagine you have to make 20 of them in a month. That mind set should help keep the backgrounds peppy!

I could talk a lot about what it means for the background to compliment the animation, but the selfless, cartoon loving John K. has done it better:
http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/2008/06/bg-layout-tips-for-nate.html
http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/2006/10/eager-beaver-1946-functional-beautiful.html
http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/2008/07/organizing-bg-layout-elements.html

And if you're up for even more, here's just every post he made with the label "composition"
http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/search/label/composition

John K. is basically providing an animation production master class for free!